sorry about being a 'gushing mummy' but I really wanted to share this
with someone. I thought it was cute.
Id been reading some simple poetry to K this afternoon and she decided
to try her hand at some after by herself to read to me.
(Ive put the correct spellings in in case its hard to decipher!)
The Sun is so goldin (golden)
The sun is so goldin
apelles (apples) are so crunchy
I love it all (written in big letters!!)
Choclit (chocolate) is so sweet
donte (don't) you think I am to
ok, I know its not Wordsworth but I love it for a first poem :)

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Mo - 27 Apr 2005 23:15 GMT
> sorry about being a 'gushing mummy' but I really wanted to share this
> with someone. I thought it was cute.
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> ok, I know its not Wordsworth but I love it for a first poem :)
I love it :-). Do tell her her cyber auntie in the Netherlands thinks
she's *at least* as sweet as chocolate (and I *love* chocolate ;-) ).

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kiticat - 27 Apr 2005 23:24 GMT
>>The Sun is so goldin (golden)
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> I love it :-). Do tell her her cyber auntie in the Netherlands thinks
> she's *at least* as sweet as chocolate (and I *love* chocolate ;-) ).
:)
lol, I will!

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Bell Jar - 27 Apr 2005 23:24 GMT
IT's wonderful :D
> sorry about being a 'gushing mummy' but I really wanted to share this with
> someone. I thought it was cute.
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> ok, I know its not Wordsworth but I love it for a first poem :)
Nan - 28 Apr 2005 00:43 GMT
>sorry about being a 'gushing mummy' but I really wanted to share this
>with someone. I thought it was cute.
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>ok, I know its not Wordsworth but I love it for a first poem :)
It's perfect :-)
Nan
Caroline or Greg - 28 Apr 2005 02:31 GMT
it is beatutiful
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> sorry about being a 'gushing mummy' but I really wanted to share this
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Mermaid - 28 Apr 2005 05:44 GMT
> sorry about being a 'gushing mummy' but I really wanted to share this
> with someone. I thought it was cute.
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> ok, I know its not Wordsworth but I love it for a first poem :)
That really is a great poem Sarah! A great deal of smarts in her use of
words and similarity's... she is sweet and *goldin*!
Anni
toto - 28 Apr 2005 22:18 GMT
>sorry about being a 'gushing mummy' but I really wanted to share this
>with someone. I thought it was cute.
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>ok, I know its not Wordsworth but I love it for a first poem :)
Lovely. I think she is sweet too.
--
Dorothy
There is no sound, no cry in all the world
that can be heard unless someone listens ..
The Outer Limits
Kate - 28 Apr 2005 23:02 GMT
Aww yeah - that is as sweet as that choccy she was writing about
good for her
K :o)))